The ponderings and conclusions of a deep, young mind.
Great meter, rhythm, word choice, imagery, addition of a nature element, and metaphor. And this is really only your second haiku? Kudos, my high-reaching friend.
It was actually my third. My second was odd and kinda bumpy. I don't even remember what it was.
Great meter, rhythm, word choice, imagery, addition of a nature element, and metaphor. And this is really only your second haiku? Kudos, my high-reaching friend.
ReplyDeleteIt was actually my third. My second was odd and kinda bumpy. I don't even remember what it was.
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